Very interesting game with some really exciting choices towards the end. You made some significant improvements to the dream section which made it feel more resolved ad effective. The writing was good, with compelling descriptions of mysterious circumstances and good pacing. Nice work!
Making choices to save others is so much harder than if it were yourself. I wonder if the words I chose actually determined who ended up dying? The story was so engaging and kept me wondering what would happen next. Although the epilogue ends on a cliffhanger, it doesn't make the main story feel incomplete at all! Very well written and a lovely read :)
this game is very cinematic, I really enjoyed the characters sprinkled in and I really wanted to see them succeed. O as a character also handled very well he's very mysterious but his presence still carries a lot of weight. I am curious to see what happens next!
Cool setting! i like making decisions of human nature. I got to this ending where i'm the bait to getting in touch with O. and it seems like the story will be continued after. there's one small thing that maybe needs to be fixed, where "ask it about the tests" came up twice.
Very interesting story, I enjoyed the choices I got to make, there is a glitch the second time around when you write food down, nothing happens. Other then that, great game!
I found this story very interesting. I ended up seeing a god in my dreams and later on, tried my best to help people in a tough situation by writing words. The word writing situation was wonderful, I really felt like my words made both a physical difference as well as a symbolic one.
The writing in this was clear and colorful, I especially liked the line "you do not get to choose who dines with Death."
I enjoyed the suspense of this game. I like that there is just enough world building for the game to make sense. It helps me keep track of the story and of my decisions as well. THe game's payoff feels very satisfactory and gives a perfect closure to a dramatic game like this. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Great job.
I really enjoyed the game's dynamic changes between day and night and the actions I could perform each day. The story's narrative is gripping, filled with suspense, rebellion, and existential questions. I particularly liked the final scene, where the facilitator presses her hand on some ancient texts that depict a veiled figure opening a gate, seemingly releasing creatures from within。
I really like this game and the character in this game. We are trying to escape a place, we are 1318 and O is the ancient god that seems to danger the world based on what Dr.Ford said at the end. The ending and the overall game is really cool and include very detail description.
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Very interesting game with some really exciting choices towards the end. You made some significant improvements to the dream section which made it feel more resolved ad effective. The writing was good, with compelling descriptions of mysterious circumstances and good pacing. Nice work!
Making choices to save others is so much harder than if it were yourself. I wonder if the words I chose actually determined who ended up dying? The story was so engaging and kept me wondering what would happen next. Although the epilogue ends on a cliffhanger, it doesn't make the main story feel incomplete at all! Very well written and a lovely read :)
this game is very cinematic, I really enjoyed the characters sprinkled in and I really wanted to see them succeed. O as a character also handled very well he's very mysterious but his presence still carries a lot of weight. I am curious to see what happens next!
Cool setting! i like making decisions of human nature. I got to this ending where i'm the bait to getting in touch with O. and it seems like the story will be continued after. there's one small thing that maybe needs to be fixed, where "ask it about the tests" came up twice.
Very interesting story, I enjoyed the choices I got to make, there is a glitch the second time around when you write food down, nothing happens. Other then that, great game!
I found this story very interesting. I ended up seeing a god in my dreams and later on, tried my best to help people in a tough situation by writing words. The word writing situation was wonderful, I really felt like my words made both a physical difference as well as a symbolic one.
The writing in this was clear and colorful, I especially liked the line "you do not get to choose who dines with Death."
I enjoyed the suspense of this game. I like that there is just enough world building for the game to make sense. It helps me keep track of the story and of my decisions as well. THe game's payoff feels very satisfactory and gives a perfect closure to a dramatic game like this. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Great job.
I really enjoyed the game's dynamic changes between day and night and the actions I could perform each day. The story's narrative is gripping, filled with suspense, rebellion, and existential questions. I particularly liked the final scene, where the facilitator presses her hand on some ancient texts that depict a veiled figure opening a gate, seemingly releasing creatures from within。
I really like this game and the character in this game. We are trying to escape a place, we are 1318 and O is the ancient god that seems to danger the world based on what Dr.Ford said at the end. The ending and the overall game is really cool and include very detail description.